my BLACK and WHITE life

hello world.
it's been a long and tiring week. don't know why i am so tired, because i don't even study very hard. i should though. everyone! if you see me online, tell me to go and study! or better still, give me tips.
tour's coming too, so i'll be extra-busy. but i'm quite excited. i think i have a good group(: means tour will be fun! yay!
i must remember to bring lots of snacks and sweets, so i can share it with my nice friends during tour, and not give them to people i don't like. so they will be jealous. haw haww.
anyway, on hindsight, i think the last poem i posted was quite whatever, so i am going to have a second attempt.

roses are red, turnips are smelly
nafa is coming, but i'm growing a belly
my pull ups are doomed and so is my broadjump
whenever i land, i land on my rump (ass)
i've tried gymming and i've tried protein powder
but to no avail, for i'm as weak as a flower!
someone please help, stop laughing in glee
quick! come down to ac and pretend to be me!

the end(:
is this one any better?